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Change: don't know..I want it to be special.Meg: Well sounds like you made the right choice. Noah: I wantcha to know everyday I think how lucky I am to have you.Luke: That's all I needed to hear.(few more lines)ROMANTIC KISS!
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Aug 7 2008, 2:06 PM EDT
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Change: now you're here telling me that I never fought for you? Luke: The first time Noah and I are together, I want it...I don't know..I want it to be special.Meg: Well sounds like you made the right choice.
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Aug 2 2008, 12:00 PM EDT
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Change: Not to me. I stayed. I showed you that I didn't care if you were in a wheelchair or not. I did those exercises with
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Jul 4 2008, 12:54 PM EDT
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Jun 28 2008, 7:00 PM EDT
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Jun 28 2008, 6:59 PM EDT
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Jun 28 2008, 6:57 PM EDT
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Change: being...youbeing...you know...Luke: Gay... Noah: Hey.Luke: Hey.Noah: You came. I didn't think you were going to.Luke: Are you sorry that I did?Noah: No. No, not at, not at all.Luke: I believe you.Noah: Okay.Luke leans over Noah.Luke: I just
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Jun 27 2008, 9:37 PM EDT
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Change: Sarcastically Oo, how romantic.Noah: It is when you spend your formative years in a laundromat of an army base. Everytime i see a roll of quarters i break out in hives.Luke: Laughing There is so much about you i don't know.Noah: Smiling Yeah well, we've got time.
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Jun 27 2008, 10:32 AM EDT
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Change: don’t… I just... I just...Ijust... just..II just totally weirded you out…it’sout… it’s ok… you… ok…you…youyou can go if you want. But it was really, really kind of you to come. Noah: Luke, I’m not going anywhere until you answer
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Jun 22 2008, 7:32 AM EDT
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Change: You think that, you know, I have a much better chance of meeting a nice boy like me if I get involved with one of
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Jun 21 2008, 9:53 PM EDT
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Change: I will help you out with some of your chores as long as I get some of those there browniesLuke: Laughs and walks out with Noah_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Out on the back porch of the Snyder FarmNoah: Luke, *grabs luke by the shoulder and presses him against him*
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Jun 21 2008, 7:44 PM EDT
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Change: Oh. You know I have, but she's right out there.Noah: She knows how I feel about you.Luke: Laughing Yeah, but still.Noah: I can't stand being around you and not touching you. Luke: Okay Jade. Damn it. You've got a
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Jun 21 2008, 7:43 PM EDT
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Change: you, andyou. I'm soso, in love with you.They kiss, but are interrupted by the police. Noah: Is that why my heart is beating so fast?Luke: Just breathe. Luke starts to unbutton Noah's shirt.Noah: I'll try. Noah: It's not about you! Luke: Well it
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Jun 21 2008, 1:52 PM EDT
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Change: after a really rough game of handball.Noah: Grinning Have you been watching porn?Luke: Laughs At my grandma’s house?! No. Luke: A nice relaxing weekend at a lakehouse. Get to meet some other gay couples...Socialize...Noah: Sounds really great doesn't it? Especially the part about...sharing a bedroom. Luke:
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Jun 19 2008, 6:54 PM EDT
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Change: kicked out of your life.Noah: It's just for a little while, okay? I'm trying to be honest.Luke: Honest? Okay. Well, why don't you go full on with this honestly thing, Noah? You blame me. Admit it! Luke: Annoyed Oh, shut up. I'm paying.
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Jun 16 2008, 11:31 AM EDT
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Change: kicked out of your life....life.Noah: It's just for a little while, okay? I'm trying to be honest....honest.Luke: Honest? Okay....Okay. Well, letwhy medon't you go full on with this honestly thingthing, Noah....Noah? You blame me. Admit it!
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Jun 14 2008, 2:53 PM EDT
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Jun 14 2008, 2:43 PM EDT
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Change: Luke: Well it kinda feels like it's about me. Since I'm the one being kicked out of your life....Noah: It's just for a little while, okay? I'm trying to be honest....Luke: Honest? Okay.... Well, let me go full on with this honestly thing Noah.... You blame
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May 21 2008, 1:28 PM EDT
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Change: to use it. Noah: I love you, and I'm so in love with you.They kiss, but are interrupted by the police. Noah: Is that why my heart is beating so fast?Luke: Just breathebreathe. (Luke starts to unbutton Noah's shirt)shirt.Noah: I'll trytry.
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May 21 2008, 1:23 PM EDT
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Change: ever going to use it. Noah: I love you, and I'm so in love with you.They kiss, but are interrupted by the police. Noah: Is that why my heart is beating so fast?Luke: Just breathe (starts to unbutton Noah's shirt)Noah: I'll try
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