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lalo_mxfansleader03 and Lostaway
-Song inspiration: "Colorblind" (Counting Crows)-
-Chosen by Carrie (Lostaway)-
Summary: The story starts after Luke and Noah had problems due to the daily lies and no contact with each other when Ameera came to their life. As a result, they broke up.
-It starts with both gazing out the window from different houses, both separated by fate, yet united by memories. When Luke sees a couple kissing, the past comes to mind. His lips could still feel him, calling his name . . . Noah—
(Snyder's house)
Luke (touching his lips): ''It hurts me so much, needing you... missing you...and...god! Why can't I stop thinking about you Noah? Did I love you enough to hurt this much?''
Tears filled Luke's eyes as he remembered the last kiss, the last hug and last goodbye, as Noah gazed out the window at the cottage, his eyes became cloudy with tears and memories too, both unable to forget the past.—
(Will and Gwen's cottage)
Noah: "I wish this was all a lie, a dream, I should’ve never let you go . . . but I´m a . . . coward! It's all my fault . . . I just . . . damn it! I can't . . . I need you! . . . Luke''
Their tears fell like rain, cold and unstoppable. Loneliness filled their hearts, and no room was big enough to hold the feelings that escaped from their hearts. Both remained in silence and yet screamed from the inside with nobody around to hear. Time faded away in a distant memory that seemed eternity within seconds. With nothing to do or no one to hold, both Luke and Noah went out for a walk. The day seemed dark even though the sunshine was brighter than ever with happiness all around, people smiling and laughing, but nothing to keep their minds away from the past. Then the same thought came to both disturbed minds, a place that was unforgettable for both—the studio that was the sole witness of their first kiss. It was a place to remember, to feel like once more the most beautiful moment could happen. After a slow walk through Oakdale, Noah arrived first and some minutes later, Luke arrived, too. They walked through the halls without knowing that they were both at the same place. With each step, the memories of their past became more present. Noah entered the same office he was when the kiss first happened, and then Luke came through the door. A silent moment followed the scene, but their eyes met meaning each second they gazed on each other, saying every word they couldn't—
Luke: "Um, uh . . . hi. I just . . . sorry, I gotta go!"
He turned back.
Noah: "No . . . don’t go.”
Luke stopped.
Noah: “I’m the one leaving, I just needed to . . . I can’t . . . hmm, never mind.”
Noah walked away and Luke could feel his pain, as before he felt everything through his eyes, and so could Noah, he saw Luke's heart into his eyes, feeling close, but far away from what they ever wanted, the love they dreamed, and each of them were scared to hurt each other again. So they didn’t talk. Luke walked away too right behind Noah. Both of them trying to hold the beating of their hearts steady, but in a single instant they turned around—
Both: "Wait, I just . . ."
They both laughed. They looked at each other and the scene of their first kiss came to their minds. They could feel the heat of the moment rising like that time before, the voice that could no longer be silent or in other words the feeling of their hearts, that were crushed, but still living and becoming stronger with the feelings they gave to each other with a simple look. This was their love’s rebirth—
Noah: "I . . . can’t."
Luke: "I missed . . ."
Both: "I need you."
Without holding back, they ran to each other's arms. They looked at each other and slowly reached their lips together. They both felt the urge of needing each other, and yet their kiss was slow—a kiss that missed their time together, a kiss that made every second a beautiful eternity for their lives . . .
THE END
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Are you trying to break my heart guys? Seriously are you?
The song, the words, the clips, just a perfect mix. I'm so happy that they found their way back to each other. It's poetic, it's beautiful, heartbreaking, bittersweet, lovingly.........but could I have expected anything else when you work together? Nope, don't think so... GREAT JOB GUYS! |
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