lalo_mxfansleader03 and octogirlpretty

-Story by Eduardo Cortes (lalo_mxfansleader03)-
-Song inspiration: Come Here Boy by Imogen Heap-
-Chosen by: Octogirlpretty
-Video by Floy Burke (octogirlpretty)-







-The story starts after Ameera went away Luke and Noah went on a camping trip to the forest to replace the time taken from them, and the scene starts after they come from fishing on a cloudy afternoon. As they walk to a cabin in the middle of the forest, talking about the past and enjoying every second of their time, without having to worry about anyone but themselves-


Luke: "Looks like it's gonna rain."


Noah: "Look so, we better hurry."


-They stop a few steps in front of the cabin and they start holding hands, gazing at each other-


Noah: "I missed the heat of your arms around me, your soft and smooth lips."


Luke: "I missed you more than anything, but now we have time for ourselves and nobody to stop us."


-They smile and Luke started to put his arms around Noah's neck and softly Noah took Luke by his waist. Slowly they kiss, as the first drops of rain slide among their lips, memories of the past come by and go like dancing images around them as their bodies get wet with a mixture of rain and sweat, the cold and hot feeling of love could be sensed around them-


Noah: "We better get inside, we are gonna catch a cold."


Luke: "Yeah, I'm gonna start the fire, come!"


Noah: "Wait! Come here . . . I just wanna feel you . . . hold you . . . kiss you!


Luke: "But it's cold out here."


Noah: "I can fix that."


Luke: "Oh yeah?"


Noah: "Yeah."


-They kiss again, the heat of their bodies were enough to forget about the weather. After a while rain became stronger, then, still holding hands they walked into the cabin. Luke started the fire, and they began to take off their wet shirts in front of the fire place. They grabbed some towels and dried up each others body, slowly and looking at every part they touched, kissing ever part gently. Shoulders, arms, neck, every part, and so the cold then disappeared into the heat of their bodies, and each others eyes. Noah hugged Luke, then he walked forward pushing Luke softly backwards, until they reached the bed-


Noah (Kissing Luke):"Turn around."


Luke: "What?"


-The same tie that bounded their hearts since they first kissed was laying on the bed-


Luke: "Hey! This is your tie..."


Noah: "Our tie! . . . I thought that this would be better than rose petals over the bed. Does it reminds you of something?''


Luke: "Yeah, I will never forget that day, first time we kissed . . . this brought us closer than ever."


-Luke took the tie and put it around Noah's neck to pull him closer-


Noah: "Well, I think of another way to be closer."


Luke: "Oh, really? And what's that?"


Noah: "This . . ."


-They kissed again, but this time they took off their pants. Slowly and still kissing, nervously breathing, for such a moment that they waited for, and still wondering what it would be like, but without a doubt that their love would lead them to some beautiful moment. And then Luke layed himself on the white silk sheets of the bed, as Noah came on top of him, kissing him, caressing him and giving himself to Luke. And so time faded away, as the surrounding place did, it was just Luke and Noah. Rain became a storm and then a strong wind opened a window above them, but they didn't even feel the cold of the air, because their heat was much more stronger, this didn't stop them. Time passed away with the rhythm of ups and downs, the sliding kisses and heat of love. Noah grabbed Luke's hands tightly and held them against the pillows strongly. The ecstasy was about to happen, right before dawn, as the storm became rain again, slowly fading away, as for them, their first time happened. Words couldn't define the ecstasy the felt. Breathing exhaustively, looking at each tenderly and wondering what each other thought about it. Silently and speaking with the eyes, about a romance that finally was sealed by two hearts, two bodies and love. Both just layed by each others side gazing-


Noah: ''So, what . . . what do you . . .uh ?''


Luke: ''You were more than a dream.''


-Having said that Noah layed his head on Luke's chest and both fell asleep at dawn and remained asleep for hours until the last drop of rain slided through the window and fell Luke's chest. Awaking him from his beautiful dream that came true. Noah got up earlier in the morning and came to Luke with his right hand behind his back-


Noah: ''Hey! You finally woke up!''


Luke: ''Yeah, what . . . time is it?''


Noah: ''Late . . . for your surprise.''


Luke: ''What . . . what surprise?''


-Noah layed down on his knees while Luke layed on bed looking at him and wondering. Then Noah moved his hand in front of him revealing a small black box. Luke remained silent as Noah opened the box and said-


Noah: ''Luke . . . will you marry me?''


THE END


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Lotsip GUH! and SWOOOOOOOOOON 0 Jul 10 2008, 6:41 PM EDT by Lotsip
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ok where to start?

the text: That was so romantic and a really nice touch with the tie, loved it. And the end! My God, I didn't see that one coming.

the song: It fitted perfect with the text and the vid and I really like Imogen as well!

The vid; that is some nice editing right there, I really liked how you told the story and you brought up some clips that i had almost forgot about. when you mixed that kiss with flashbacks of their life, a strike of genius i believe! ; )

Really liked it you guys!
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