"that was quite lovely, I think the lines were nicely emphasized due to the lack of competing vocals, so everything really stood out.

Great job! Also like that you've compartmentalized it instead of having a whole sweeping set of scenes enveloping their relationship. Not it "reads" like a chapter 1 with chapters to follow each being tied but completely independent of each other to the point where they can stand on their own.

I really liked this Lewis!
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"I really like it too. There is a sweetness and even a little innocence in the storyline that is showcased well by the music. A lot of the other vids I have seen discount the journey with Maddie. I always felt it was important and you choose some of the best parts of that. (Although the part where Maddie says something about how Noah likes old movies and stuff should have been a dead give away for her :) )

Also I think you ended The Beginning perfectly."