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geezlouise |
1. RE: You scare me!!!
Oct 16 2008, 5:52 AM EDT
OK, I am officially scared. Don't prolong the agony for too long...oh boy! Good, scary start.
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2. RE: You scare me!!!
Oct 16 2008, 7:13 AM EDT
Keith GREAT!! It´s scary... but in the same time sexy... I need my new neighbor Joeseph right now!!!!
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sweetlikeD |
3. RE: You scare me!!!
Oct 22 2008, 11:46 PM EDT
Wow, Keith this is great! One of my favorite parts was:These brief, wordless moments are what they cherished the most. I love that line. And I love moments like that. And wow, the kiss at the end... I'm a sucker for a well written kiss, and that had enough imagery and passion to really hit me. If I didn't have lunch in a second, I'd be off to read part 2, but you can be sure I'll definitely reading it when I get back. I can't wait to see what happens. Do you find this valuable? |
BombWarning |
4. RE: You scare me!!!
Oct 23 2008, 12:03 AM EDT
Oh my god, Keith this is....Oh my god!! It's chilling!! Seriously. That dream was so terrifying, I'm so scared for them. And Luke comforting Noah was so sweet and so beautiful. I love H/C. You're a really, really good writer. And you should know, that I don't say that lightly. Do you find this valuable? |
Chez_44 |
5. RE: You scare me!!!
Oct 23 2008, 6:36 PM EDT
Keith this is awesome!!wow is all i have to say!! Do you find this valuable? |
