"Oh my niece!!!!!!!! That was too cute. I love Melody. She's adorable. Poor Luke getting scared over Oscar. I hope everything works out there. I wanna hit Holden for being so retarded. UGH!!!!!!!! Bring on the next chapter sweetie :D"

"Another great chapter.

How can Holden act like that knowing Luke needs to remain calm at all times.
I'm glad Noah spoke up and Luke asked Holden and his mom to leave and not Damian.
Damian (crossing my fingers) seems to want a relationship with his son and grandchildren
including Noah. I think he sees the love they all share.

I'm looking forward to the house hunting. It's grueling and if they take the
kids with them I think funny too.

So how are you feeling, any better? "

"After reading Chapter 13, I'd nominate Noah (counting using nearly all 10 fingers) for Lover, Husband, Father, Son-in-Law, Shopper, Protector, Story Teller and Provider of the Year.

Amy, I can't tell you how much I enjoyed this chapter. I had forgotten that Grandma Emma Snyder had been a romance novelist in a ATWT storyline way back maybe in the '80s? You revived it with such a special scene among several. I wonder how many fathers still read bedtime stories to their children like Luke and Noah....indeed a lost art.

How you're going top this, I don't know. But I'll be right here...waiting. "

"I really loved this chapter! i love how noah went to chicago to get luke cloths i love how noah yelled at everybody at the table because the whole situation got out of hand holden needs to lighten up i mean i know he wants to protect them from damien but i think damien has proved he deserves another chance :) Mel is still adorable lol i love her. just a really great chapter next one please :)"