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Grinder1833
Grinder1833
Ready to Take a Chance Again - Chapter 7
Nov 23 2009, 8:10 PM EST | Post edited: Nov 23 2009, 8:10 PM EST
Noah joins Luke and his friends for a movie night at the farmhouse.

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scpajor
scpajor
1. RE: Ready to Take a Chance Again - Chapter 7
Nov 24 2009, 12:20 AM EST | Post edited: Nov 24 2009, 12:20 AM EST
I loved everything with Noah and Maddie!! And great surprise at the end. :-) I wonder what she'll have to say about Noah.
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Volver
2. RE: Ready to Take a Chance Again - Chapter 7
Nov 24 2009, 1:55 PM EST | Post edited: Nov 24 2009, 1:55 PM EST
Dawn at the risk of boring you - I LOVE IT - Can´t wait you know what I mean!! Sorry for beeing so unimaginative ... Do you find this valuable?    
Grinder1833
Grinder1833
3. RE: Ready to Take a Chance Again - Chapter 7
Nov 24 2009, 3:06 PM EST | Post edited: Nov 24 2009, 3:06 PM EST
"I loved everything with Noah and Maddie!! And great surprise at the end. :-) I wonder what she'll have to say about Noah.
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Thanks! I'm glad that you didn't expect Jade arriving at the end. I love it when I can surprise people! :) Do you find this valuable?    
Grinder1833
Grinder1833
4. RE: Ready to Take a Chance Again - Chapter 7
Nov 24 2009, 3:07 PM EST | Post edited: Nov 24 2009, 3:07 PM EST
"Dawn at the risk of boring you - I LOVE IT - Can´t wait you know what I mean!! Sorry for beeing so unimaginative ... "
Thank you! I'm happy to hear it and you don't have to worry about being creative with your comments! I'm very pleased that you are enjoying this story. Do you find this valuable?    
geezlouise
geezlouise
5. RE: Ready to Take a Chance Again - Chapter 7
Nov 24 2009, 3:47 PM EST | Post edited: Nov 24 2009, 3:47 PM EST
The dynamic film buff duo of Maddie and Noah...it was so good to eavesdrop on one of their conversations about movie trivia. Loved the conversation Noah had with Luke Seems like their preconceived notions about each other were really off base. And is Casey really that dumb or does he work at it...LOL!

Wonderful chapter, Dawn. Looking forward to reading Chapter 8. Do you find this valuable?    

Lotsip
6. RE: Ready to Take a Chance Again - Chapter 7
Nov 24 2009, 4:35 PM EST | Post edited: Nov 24 2009, 4:35 PM EST
oh god, not Jade! I'm sorry, but I can't staaaand that woman! urgh.

I loved loved loved having them recite Whitman. that was just too adorable.
and noah and maddie finding each other over old movies, makes me wanna go watch some.

but what the heck is casey's problem huh? is he on extra jerk mood or something!?

great, great stuff Dawn! Do you find this valuable?    
jeb423
jeb423
7. RE: Ready to Take a Chance Again - Chapter 7
Nov 24 2009, 7:44 PM EST | Post edited: Nov 24 2009, 7:44 PM EST
OMG not Jade..ugh can't she drop off the face of the earth?
But Dawn, I have to say, this chapter is really good indeed.
Noah and Maddie are really hitting it off right away with the movie stuff!
And wtf is Casey's beef?
Great job sweetie!! :) Do you find this valuable?    
Grinder1833
Grinder1833
8. RE: Ready to Take a Chance Again - Chapter 7
Nov 24 2009, 7:54 PM EST | Post edited: Nov 24 2009, 7:54 PM EST
"The dynamic film buff duo of Maddie and Noah...it was so good to eavesdrop on one of their conversations about movie trivia. Loved the conversation Noah had with Luke Seems like their preconceived notions about each other were really off base. And is Casey really that dumb or does he work at it...LOL!

Wonderful chapter, Dawn. Looking forward to reading Chapter 8. "
I loved Noah and Maddie's friendship. I just wish that they could have stayed friends. Luke and Noah learned a bit about each other during their little talk. Casey was a bit jealous there so that's why he went into jerk mode. Haven't we seen that quite a bit on the show?

Thanks for the compliments! I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter! :) Do you find this valuable?    
Grinder1833
Grinder1833
9. RE: Ready to Take a Chance Again - Chapter 7
Nov 24 2009, 7:58 PM EST | Post edited: Nov 24 2009, 7:58 PM EST
"oh god, not Jade! I'm sorry, but I can't staaaand that woman! urgh.

I loved loved loved having them recite Whitman. that was just too adorable.
and noah and maddie finding each other over old movies, makes me wanna go watch some.

but what the heck is casey's problem huh? is he on extra jerk mood or something!?

great, great stuff Dawn! "
Yup....she's in the house and I'm sure you're not the only one who isn't too happy to see her! ;)

The Whitman reciting was Robin's brainchild. I thought it was a great idea and was happy to include it into the story. I also loved Noah and Maddie's geek speak. I'm looking forward to adding more!

I think when Casey feels threatened he tends to go into jerk mode. Remember how he acted during the whole Adam thing? Hopefully he'll see that Noah isn't a threat and wants nothing more than friendship with Maddie.

Thanks for the feedback! I really appreciate it! :) Do you find this valuable?    
Grinder1833
Grinder1833
10. RE: Ready to Take a Chance Again - Chapter 7
Nov 24 2009, 8:01 PM EST | Post edited: Nov 24 2009, 8:01 PM EST
"OMG not Jade..ugh can't she drop off the face of the earth?
But Dawn, I have to say, this chapter is really good indeed.
Noah and Maddie are really hitting it off right away with the movie stuff!
And wtf is Casey's beef?
Great job sweetie!! :)"
Sorry...but Jade is around during this time period and it's time for her to make her grand entrance. "Buckle up, it's going to be a bumpy ride" because you know she doesn't make things easy...lol.

Noah and Maddie are gold together. I love their friendship because it's just so incredibly sweet and fun. Casey is jealous and feeling threatened....silly boy!

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter! :) Do you find this valuable?    
MDFawn
MDFawn
11. RE: Ready to Take a Chance Again - Chapter 7
Nov 28 2009, 6:03 PM EST | Post edited: Nov 28 2009, 6:03 PM EST
I'm loving this story so far, Dawn. I waiting (not patiently, but I'm waiting) for the next chapter. Great job.

Anna Do you find this valuable?    
Grinder1833
Grinder1833
12. RE: Ready to Take a Chance Again - Chapter 7
Nov 28 2009, 8:15 PM EST | Post edited: Nov 28 2009, 8:15 PM EST
"I'm loving this story so far, Dawn. I waiting (not patiently, but I'm waiting) for the next chapter. Great job.

Anna"
Thank you! Glad to hear that you like this. I've been trying to work on it this weekend between Christmas shopping and putting up the Christmas tree! :) Do you find this valuable?    
lightsaber27
lightsaber27
13. RE: Ready to Take a Chance Again - Chapter 7
Nov 29 2009, 6:28 PM EST | Post edited: Nov 29 2009, 6:28 PM EST
"Noah joins Luke and his friends for a movie night at the farmhouse.

Enjoy! :) "
Oh wow!! Noah decided to risk it and put himself out there!! He never expected Luke to be as interesting as he is. I love how he quoted Whitman to Luke!! He really earned some points with Luke talking about his horse and the poet. And Maddie already took one look and told Luke Noah was a Looker. Little does Maddie know Luke has already determined that!! and Casey certainly is the farthest thing from "blane" college guy you can get!! i find it so amusing Luke thinks Noah is straight and Noah thinks Casey was his boyfriend!!! The whole section with Maddie and Noah in the kitchen is really good, he's found a friend! Casey is jealous, and will probably feel stupid when he finally figures out Noah is gay!! I have a feeling Maddie is going to try to play matchmaker! Looking forward to the next chapter. Do you find this valuable?    
Grinder1833
Grinder1833
14. RE: Ready to Take a Chance Again - Chapter 7
Nov 29 2009, 9:47 PM EST | Post edited: Nov 29 2009, 9:47 PM EST
"Oh wow!! Noah decided to risk it and put himself out there!! He never expected Luke to be as interesting as he is. I love how he quoted Whitman to Luke!! He really earned some points with Luke talking about his horse and the poet. And Maddie already took one look and told Luke Noah was a Looker. Little does Maddie know Luke has already determined that!! and Casey certainly is the farthest thing from "blane" college guy you can get!! i find it so amusing Luke thinks Noah is straight and Noah thinks Casey was his boyfriend!!! The whole section with Maddie and Noah in the kitchen is really good, he's found a friend! Casey is jealous, and will probably feel stupid when he finally figures out Noah is gay!! I have a feeling Maddie is going to try to play matchmaker! Looking forward to the next chapter."
Thanks!

Noah did earn some points here! I always enjoyed Noah and Maddie's friendship so it was fun writing them becoming friends again. I'm glad to hear that you liked that part. Casey better feel a bit dumb if he finds out the truth after the way he acted. Do you find this valuable?    
LynnPiazzola
LynnPiazzola
15. RE: Ready to Take a Chance Again - Chapter 7
Dec 1 2009, 3:30 PM EST | Post edited: Dec 1 2009, 3:30 PM EST
Wow!! I love this story so far. I love the conection between Luke and Noah over Whitman, and between Noah and Maddie over classic movies. I am anxiously awaiting Chapter 8. I think adding Jade to the mix will add some colorful scenes!! Thank you for sharing your stories with us!! Do you find this valuable?    
Grinder1833
Grinder1833
16. RE: Ready to Take a Chance Again - Chapter 7
Dec 1 2009, 4:12 PM EST | Post edited: Dec 1 2009, 4:12 PM EST
"Wow!! I love this story so far. I love the conection between Luke and Noah over Whitman, and between Noah and Maddie over classic movies. I am anxiously awaiting Chapter 8. I think adding Jade to the mix will add some colorful scenes!! Thank you for sharing your stories with us!!"
Thanks! I'm happy to hear that you are enjoying this story. There was a lot of bonding going on in this chapter. Jade should make things interesting. I hope her arrival doesn't disappoint. Thanks for reading and commenting! :) Do you find this valuable?    
ritalaura2000
ritalaura2000
17. RE: Ready to Take a Chance Again - Chapter 7
Dec 5 2009, 11:18 AM EST | Post edited: Dec 5 2009, 11:18 AM EST
...... today I'm not completely fine, you know sometimes be woman means a bad day... and your story makes me forget all the little pain that I have today, Dawn you're so great when you write, I love each words, each scene, each idea that you have... please add fast, I know that sometimes it's hard write fast.... but try, I can't wait for the 1st kissss

i love the when they look at each other at the beginning, I love the "fear" that they feel, Luke thinking that Noah is straight, Noah that want to take his secret... and Love the felling that Maddie and Noah had

great work.. and thanks Do you find this valuable?    
Grinder1833
Grinder1833
18. RE: Ready to Take a Chance Again - Chapter 7
Dec 5 2009, 7:52 PM EST | Post edited: Dec 5 2009, 7:52 PM EST
"...... today I'm not completely fine, you know sometimes be woman means a bad day... and your story makes me forget all the little pain that I have today, Dawn you're so great when you write, I love each words, each scene, each idea that you have... please add fast, I know that sometimes it's hard write fast.... but try, I can't wait for the 1st kissss

i love the when they look at each other at the beginning, I love the "fear" that they feel, Luke thinking that Noah is straight, Noah that want to take his secret... and Love the felling that Maddie and Noah had

great work.. and thanks "
I'm glad that my little story can help you out a bit. Thank you for the compliment! I hope to have Chapter 8 ready to post by Monday or Tuesday. Thanks so much for reading and commenting! I really appreciate it! :) Do you find this valuable?    
holapearl
holapearl
19. RE: Ready to Take a Chance Again - Chapter 7
Feb 26 2010, 1:59 AM EST | Post edited: Feb 26 2010, 1:59 AM EST
I'm glad Noah is feeling at ease now. Luke and Noah are getting to know each other better :) soon sparks would start flying yay :D can't wai

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