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gabryland |
1. RE: We Met Under The Boardwalk - Chapter 5
Mar 20 2012, 3:54 PM EDT
well......Luke and Noah togethger are the sweetest thing........and in this chapter they start to be VERY HOT :P
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scj0710 |
2. RE: We Met Under The Boardwalk - Chapter 5
Mar 20 2012, 6:41 PM EDT
So much meaning here! Love Luke and Noah watching the sunset....their conversation about their relationship very moving. So sweet and cute when they dash into the ocean! On the downside, I sure can picture the Colonel's angry face on the other end of that phone line! Scary thought! Luke and Noah should just give it up...neither one can resist the other one's gorgeousness!! The ending of the chapter is extremely tender and oh-so-hot! "Well! Hello there tiger...." makes me grin! Thanks for the joy your writing brings!
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