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Bijou_
Bijou_
my entry for the challenge
Aug 23 2009, 3:15 PM EDT | Post edited: Aug 23 2009, 3:15 PM EDT
uhm yeah.. this actually "looked" better in my head..

anyways.. this is set in the same Alternative Universe as my nice winston anniversary oneshot..
think of winston as the kind of Debbie Novotny (QAF) of Oakdale.. the cool dad everyone likes.
and because this place needs more fluff.. its kind of mindlessly fluffy..

and I really should stop talking now and go to bed cos it's 2.15AM..

I hope you like it and comments would be grand!
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Tirpse
Tirpse
1. RE: my entry for the challenge
Aug 23 2009, 3:25 PM EDT | Post edited: Aug 23 2009, 3:25 PM EDT
Awww, I sooo loved the ending. Noah was joking about getting engaged and then Luke really asked him. I would almost do everything to see a scene like that on the show. I would just melt!! Do you find this valuable?    
luv2writeandread
luv2writeandread
2. RE: my entry for the challenge
Aug 23 2009, 4:25 PM EDT | Post edited: Aug 23 2009, 4:25 PM EDT
AWWW!

THAT WAS SO CUTE!

PBBT A WINSTON VERSION OF DEB IS WAY WAY WAY TO MUCH FUN

I WISH I HAD MADDIE'S COMING HOME PRESENT!

THAT WAS SO SO SO CUTE!

WINSTON AND A SOUTHERN ACCENT HEHEHEHHEHEH
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geezlouise
geezlouise
3. RE: my entry for the challenge
Aug 23 2009, 7:19 PM EDT | Post edited: Aug 23 2009, 7:19 PM EDT
All this kissing and laughing and rejoicing and surprizing and proposing..

think I'm suffering from angst w/drawl...don't change a thing...

((except what's wrong with my native state?...~wink!))
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asonearth
asonearth
4. RE: my entry for the challenge
Aug 23 2009, 11:38 PM EDT | Post edited: Aug 23 2009, 11:38 PM EDT
Hi B., i hope you never get tired of writing "nice Winston ""!!!!!!!!!!!
i have to say this funny, bickering conversation you are writing has improved a lot.. Now it was not only "the parents", no this conversation with Casey was way more fun to read...i guess i take a black coffee too.. lol
thanks for another awesome story !! Annette
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Bijou_
Bijou_
5. RE: my entry for the challenge
Aug 23 2009, 11:57 PM EDT | Post edited: Aug 23 2009, 11:57 PM EDT
"Awww, I sooo loved the ending. Noah was joking about getting engaged and then Luke really asked him. I would almost do everything to see a scene like that on the show. I would just melt!!"
Thanks hun!

Almost everything eh?
must remember to tell the boys in paris lol
im sure goutman would be interested in hearing that ;)
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Bijou_
Bijou_
6. RE: my entry for the challenge
Aug 24 2009, 12:00 AM EDT | Post edited: Aug 24 2009, 12:00 AM EDT
"AWWW!

THAT WAS SO CUTE!

PBBT A WINSTON VERSION OF DEB IS WAY WAY WAY TO MUCH FUN

I WISH I HAD MADDIE'S COMING HOME PRESENT!

THAT WAS SO SO SO CUTE!

WINSTON AND A SOUTHERN ACCENT HEHEHEHHEHEH"
Thanks babe!

yeah this winston version of deb is fun to write - maybe i'll write more with him

and the southern accent.. well its the only one i could think of at 2am lol
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Bijou_
Bijou_
7. RE: my entry for the challenge
Aug 24 2009, 12:02 AM EDT | Post edited: Aug 24 2009, 12:02 AM EDT
"All this kissing and laughing and rejoicing and surprizing and proposing..

think I'm suffering from angst w/drawl...don't change a thing...

((except what's wrong with my native state?...~wink!))"
angst withdrawl is good sue ;)
this place needs a fluff injection!

You're from Connecticut then I guess?
nothing wrong with that hun - I just did a little googling and discovered Wesleyan University is in Connecticut. You know the school Maddie went to when she left town.
see, i did my homework ;)
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Bijou_
Bijou_
8. RE: my entry for the challenge
Aug 24 2009, 12:04 AM EDT | Post edited: Aug 24 2009, 12:04 AM EDT
"Hi B., i hope you never get tired of writing "nice Winston ""!!!!!!!!!!!
i have to say this funny, bickering conversation you are writing has improved a lot.. Now it was not only "the parents", no this conversation with Casey was way more fun to read...i guess i take a black coffee too.. lol
thanks for another awesome story !! Annette"
Thanks Annette!
I'm glad you liked the silly conversations. I usually just write and this is what happens..
and then i bitch to nad that its boring lol

thanks for reading hun!
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drunkyluke
drunkyluke
9. RE: my entry for the challenge
Aug 24 2009, 12:37 AM EDT | Post edited: Aug 24 2009, 12:37 AM EDT
"Thanks Annette!
I'm glad you liked the silly conversations. I usually just write and this is what happens..
and then i bitch to nad that its boring lol

thanks for reading hun!"
this was great! a nice break from all the angst i've been reading lately. this one put a smile on my face, very well done, b. good luck in the challenge.
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Bijou_
Bijou_
10. RE: my entry for the challenge
Aug 24 2009, 1:20 AM EDT | Post edited: Aug 24 2009, 1:20 AM EDT
"this was great! a nice break from all the angst i've been reading lately. this one put a smile on my face, very well done, b. good luck in the challenge."
Thanks James!

I figured this place needed more fluff :)
I'm glad you liked it!
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Lotsip
11. RE: my entry for the challenge
Aug 24 2009, 1:24 AM EDT | Post edited: Aug 24 2009, 1:24 AM EDT
that was great hon, you know I always enjoy a nice Win. But you writing about Maddie and Casey? Wasn't Jade the only girl for him? haha.

The way you make your characters bicker and joke around is also a source for great entertainment. That cream talk was spot on haha.

I want friends like these, they're a great bunch.
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Bijou_
Bijou_
12. RE: my entry for the challenge
Aug 24 2009, 1:54 AM EDT | Post edited: Aug 24 2009, 1:54 AM EDT
"that was great hon, you know I always enjoy a nice Win. But you writing about Maddie and Casey? Wasn't Jade the only girl for him? haha.

The way you make your characters bicker and joke around is also a source for great entertainment. That cream talk was spot on haha.

I want friends like these, they're a great bunch. "
Thanks babe!

haha well make next month's challenge about Jade then so I can get Casey back to the right girl :P

Glad you liked it!
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CasaLuna
CasaLuna
13. RE: my entry for the challenge
Aug 24 2009, 7:01 AM EDT | Post edited: Aug 24 2009, 7:01 AM EDT
Awwwwww.
That was so so cute!
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Bijou_
Bijou_
14. RE: my entry for the challenge
Aug 24 2009, 7:40 AM EDT | Post edited: Aug 24 2009, 7:40 AM EDT
"Awwwwww.
That was so so cute! "
Thank youuuu!

I'm glad you liked it!
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jeb423
jeb423
15. RE: my entry for the challenge
Aug 24 2009, 5:09 PM EDT | Post edited: Aug 24 2009, 5:09 PM EDT
This just made my night better after a so-so day!
Absolutely sweet and adorable B!! =)
And I love a nicer Winston!!
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Bijou_
Bijou_
16. RE: my entry for the challenge
Aug 25 2009, 2:42 AM EDT | Post edited: Aug 25 2009, 2:42 AM EDT
"This just made my night better after a so-so day!
Absolutely sweet and adorable B!! =)
And I love a nicer Winston!! "
thanks jenn

glad you enjoyed it
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Bitrixbf
Bitrixbf
17. RE: my entry for the challenge
Aug 25 2009, 4:15 AM EDT | Post edited: Aug 25 2009, 4:15 AM EDT
"“Luke.. I was only joking..” Noah said, feeling his heart skip more than one beat when he looked at his boyfriend’s smiling face.

“I’m not.”

“Yeah but Luke I- ”

“Noah, I love you, but please shut up now.” Luke interrupted his boyfriend’s protest. “Noah Mayer, I love you more than life itself. I love your weird habits, I love watching you get all excited over some ancient black and white film, I love how you turn into a little boy when you talk about your mother, I love watching you sleep, I love waking up in the morning and finding you right next to me, I love your silly notes on the fridge when you have the early shift and I’m not up yet. I love everything about you Noah, and I swear I’m not joking around anymore. Will you marry me?”

Noah looked down at the man kneeling in front of him, too shocked to say a word.

“You can talk now, Noah. Don’t make that poor boy sit on his knee that long, answer him.” Winston said, snapping his son out of his trance.
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I loved that!!!!!!!!!
How sweet and funny and cute and everything!!!!
I just loved it, B!!!
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Bijou_
Bijou_
18. RE: my entry for the challenge
Aug 25 2009, 4:23 AM EDT | Post edited: Aug 25 2009, 4:23 AM EDT
"I loved that!!!!!!!!!
How sweet and funny and cute and everything!!!!
I just loved it, B!!!"
Thanks hun!! Glad you liked it!

its amazing what i'll come up with at 2am :P
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19. RE: my entry for the challenge
Aug 25 2009, 7:25 AM EDT | Post edited: Aug 25 2009, 7:25 AM EDT
Bijou Babe you write the best Winston Stories ever!!! I LOVE IT!! <3 Do you find this valuable?    
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